Tried something different—a play on word rhythm and rhyme. Thought a bit of new and experimental would be a grand way to enter 2023.
Finding an Inside/Out
the poetics of Jung
swung
aesthetics/synthetics
the weight of process
redress
state/trait
a dream, a breakthrough
glue
dream/stream
and that is it
wit
splat/chat
| Copyright © 2023 by Michael H. Brownstein Michael H. Brownstein’s volumes of poetry, A Slipknot Into Somewhere Else and How Do We Create Love?, were published by Cholla Needles Press in 2018 & 2019, respectively. |
Michael, I have yet to try my hand at an inside/out verse, but I may give it a try. However, I think I said that about a verse constructed entirely with palindromes, and I don’t think that’s even still on my to-do list….Hmm, I hear the quiet voice of Artesia (in harmony with Alexandra Dotcheva’s voice) saying “Do it now, get it done….”
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